Earlier this week I ran a writing seminar with a small class of fourth-year university students who are working on research theses—the focus was on navigating the middle part of a project.
The aim of the seminar was to squarely address the following point: writing projects involve a kind of managerial balancing act, in which it is easy to conflate management of the product (e.g. the students’ research theses) with management of the person authoring that product.
The person is full of thoughts and feelings in a way that the product usually isn’t. Knowing how to put together a text (an essay, a book, a song, a letter, etc.) is not the same as knowing how to be during that process. Part of the challenge is knowing how to improve the work, the other part is knowing how to relate to the work as a creative person.
When we are in the middle of a project, part of the job involves making some sort of judgment about what we have produced so far. Because we can only do this in real time, our capacity to notice relevant details is quite important. The important detail, it seems to me, is this: When we appraise a piece of work, there is not an equal chance of any thought occurring, so at least part of the challenge is stacking the deck* (aka life experience) in advance. This isn’t really something that can be effectively crammed in the short term, but it can certainly be cultivated over time, since our intuition is always looking for things to remember.
Since intuition is an unavoidable conduit for the sorts of judgment we apply when revising work, it seems worthwhile to think through the quality of intuition we bring to the revisionary table. I’m usually mystified when people talk about ‘trying too hard’, but in this case I think it is a useful turn of phrase. Finding a way to achieve a passive focus during revision seems useful for engaging with technical issues without needing to have an exact technical remedy in the moment. I suspect that this explains the circling and underlining and bracketing that seems to happen organically when we work with pen and paper. These markings prime intuition in a very useful way, by flagging relevant details without putting the burden of expectation of an immediate, precise solution.
The last step is to review the marked up document, and the same passive-presence-of-mind trick can work here too. If environmental distractions can be avoided (smart phones, etc.), just sitting with a marked up set of revisionary inklings and blank piece of paper can yield bizarrely effortless results.
*Natalie Goldberg calls this composting (see Writing Down the Bones)